Interesting. I had to sit with this for awhile. Images of the Big Bang, or better, Genesis 1 went through my head for the longest time. Then, just this morning, of a birth. It is amazing how similar they are.

Was it a feather on the wind you were thinking of? Was it the wind itself? A bird? Something else?

What was your inspiration? What was in your mind as you wrote?

A great description of places we can go in our mind. Do you do a vlog? This would sound great read aloud by the author!

@whalemates
Thanks for this.
And come back.

Yes, nicely written. While I tend to like better endings the imagery here is wonderful.

Great words. I like very much how they are put together. Reminds me of TORN from Natalie Imbruglia.

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