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    Silent Radiance replied to the forum topic Creation in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    @tanisha They’re definitely similar, I’m willing to incline that much of it also has to do with man’s perceptions. There are many commonly occurring themes associated with creation (whether by a creator or […]

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    Steve replied to the forum topic Creation in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    Interesting. I had to sit with this for awhile. Images of the Big Bang, or better, Genesis 1 went through my head for the longest time. Then, just this morning, of a birth. It is amazing how similar they are.

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    Silent Radiance started the forum topic Creation in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    A light, blooming, expanding, emerging into sight,
    Awaken from infinite, brought into time,
    Noises, shuddering, shaking…so loud…from silence,
    Shhh…listen…the world is beginning.

    Figures swaying, contrast […]

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    Silent Radiance replied to the forum topic Feather in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    @tanisha A lone feather in the wind, comparably miniscule in contrast to the tremendous winds which carry it. I love piano music, it never fails to take me places!

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    Steve replied to the forum topic Feather in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    Was it a feather on the wind you were thinking of? Was it the wind itself? A bird? Something else?

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    Silent Radiance replied to the forum topic Feather in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    @tanisha my inspiration was the piano piece I posted in my update, this poem is how it made me feel.

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    Steve replied to the forum topic Feather in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    What was your inspiration? What was in your mind as you wrote?

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    Silent Radiance replied to the forum topic Feather in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    Nope @tanisha, only written I’m afraid. Thank you for the kind comments :) .

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    Steve replied to the forum topic Feather in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    A great description of places we can go in our mind. Do you do a vlog? This would sound great read aloud by the author!

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    Silent Radiance started the forum topic Feather in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    Breathe…slowly, calmly, into white,
    Soothed, nurtured, by heavenly light.

    Carried away by undercurrents, curling, twisting in the sky,
    I’m floating into seas of blue, further lonely, further high.

    Clouds […]

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    Silent Radiance started the forum topic Night Stalker in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    Crimson eyes, watching the shadows, cities blaring by,
    Neon lights flaring triumphantly, hiding fear, hiding crime,
    But I see, with a pounding heart and fearsome cry,
    Tearing through the streets, relentless […]

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    Nivi replied to the forum topic Flowers in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    @whalemates
    Thanks for this.
    And come back.

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    Steve replied to the forum topic How am I Sure? in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    Yes, nicely written. While I tend to like better endings :) the imagery here is wonderful.

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    Steve replied to the forum topic Rebirth in the group Group logoPoetry 1 year, 11 months ago

    Great words. I like very much how they are put together. Reminds me of TORN from Natalie Imbruglia.

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    Silent Radiance started the forum topic Rebirth in the group Group logoPoetry 2 years ago

    Help me, help! I’ve searched my home, outside,
    I think that I’m gone, I’ve died.
    I’m retracing my steps to find my corpse,
    I need it, to know my future course.

    It should all be here, obviously, under my […]

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    Super Woman replied to the forum topic How am I Sure? in the group Group logoPoetry 2 years, 1 month ago

    Nicely written!

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    Mary S. started the forum topic How am I Sure? in the group Group logoPoetry 2 years, 1 month ago

    How am I sure?

    Of course, there are many stars that shine bright. There’s no way to see them all, to know which one is my favorite. But the brightest one to me is my sun.

    My sun was the one to show me the […]

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    Silent Radiance started the forum topic Someone in the group Group logoPoetry 2 years, 1 month ago

    Someone took a pen and began to write a song,
    Written symbols brief yet somehow profoundly long,
    Breathless, abstract, but filled with life and rage,
    Will into words, as their heart filled up the […]

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    Silent Radiance replied to the forum topic Someone in the group Group logoPoetry 2 years, 1 month ago

    @strideintomyoffice

    Thank you :)

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    Super Woman replied to the forum topic Someone in the group Group logoPoetry 2 years, 1 month ago

    Keep up the good work!

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