Rhi said 10 years ago:

Okay it’s not exactly Shakespeare but I hope you all kinda like it. I much appreciate any advice.

I looked at you and felt so much pain,
I looked at you and wondered what is there to gain?
From fighting, from “staying strong”,
It was always bound to go wrong.
With every tear that roles down me cheek,
I feel myself become more and more weak.
I never thought it was going to be this way,
Being told that today could be your very last day…

I cradle you for the last time as you drift into a never ending sleep,
I hold myself together and try as hard as I can not to weep.
How could you leave me like this? There’s so much left for us to do.

I gently kiss your head, and whisper ever so softly I’ll always love you

You’ve got a friend in me said 10 years ago:

I almost cried. Wow, that was nice. Keep it up!

Yours truly, You’ve got a friend in me

Siddharth Raj said 10 years ago:

Simple, sweet and elegant. Too direct and straightforward, maybe that’s how you wanted it.

And here’s a quote I that I really find interesting:

First, William Faulkner, speaking of Ernest Hemingway: ‘He has never been known to use a word that might send a reader to the dictionary.’

And Hemingway’s response: ‘Poor Faulkner. Does he really think big emotions come from big words?