Rainy.Eyes said 10 years ago:

Sitting at the edge of the bench gazing at the star Oceanus .
Ringing around the earth
The cyclic fluorescent of lights shinning inside the crystal clear water

At the edge of the globe sits a lonely dreamer, looking for a wish to come true

Tears in his eyes, hid behind his eyelids
His silent gaze stood admiring the beauty he feared he will never find

Strawberry said 10 years ago:

This is simply beautiful beyond words.

Humanist Hope said 10 years ago:

I think you and Nightwish will get along marvelously. Tuomas Holopainen expresses a similar bend.

Take a trip over to youtube and enjoy. I recommend starting with “Ocean Soul”.

Rainy.Eyes said 10 years ago:

Thank you guys ! I really appreciate you for deciding to pass by and comment. To Jonathan I haven’t met Nightwish or none of those names. I like to do all sorts of poetry Im just kind of new to this so I barely ever post up in here.

Niceguy said 10 years ago:

This is amazing! :D Keep up the good work.

Rainy.Eyes said 10 years ago:

Thanks Nice Guy ! I will definitely keep working on more poetry . Thanks!