Deleted User said 10 years ago:

It’s just… I thought someone might read them.

Hey little girl with the chains on your wrists

Do the shackles hurt your hands?

Dream of your peace as though is still exists

Speak and cry and wail in a languages no one understands

Hey little girl with the demon in her eyes

It’s a never ending fight for you

Hide behind your glasses, hide behind your lies

Stay behind your walls, don’t let them break through

Hey little girl with the potion on her tongue

You must be kept silent

Your spirit is dying, but you’re much too young

You must be sedated, so says this tyrant

Hey little girl with the beast in your chest

You have must to say

Some say you’re cursed, while others say blessed

No one thinks to ask you, your words do not weigh

Hey little girl with the chains on her wrists

All you really want and need is to be kissed.

Siddharth Raj said 10 years ago:

It’s very simple and elegant. I like it. It’s very much structured like a song which adds another layer of depth to it. I wonder if this was intentional.

Rhi said 10 years ago:

This is an extremely beautiful poem. I don’t often take an interest in poems bet this is so powerful yet so simple. You should be proud of your writing abilities. :)

Deleted User said 10 years ago:

You are both very kind to say that, thank you for your kind words and for reading. But alas I’m a horrible writer :/ I wish I could be better.

Siddharth Raj said 10 years ago:

Self-Improvement and self-criticism are often good. Humbleness also goes a long way. ;)

Rhi said 10 years ago:

I think this poem has music potential could I have your permission to show it to my band members and maybe use it as lyrics for a song. Full credit to you if we put it on YouTube. (:

Rhi said 10 years ago:

I think this poem has music potential could I have your permission to show it to my band members and maybe use it as lyrics for a song. Full credit to you if we put it on YouTube. (:

Deleted User said 10 years ago:

I love your poetry!!