Noir said 9 years, 11 months ago:

**this is a piece I wrote regarding the weather, if it’s not too much I’d like to hear anyone’s thoughts. But, if it’s too much to do that’s fine. Just thank you for reading.

her face, drained of color,
like the hue of milk, releases vibrancy…

Her lips dipped in rose paint,
lays softly against cool glass.
And the rain drones on–pitter patter, pitter patter–
hitting emerable leaves,
and orcher grounds….

she sighs heavily,
her soft chest growing in time
with the soft pattering of rain.

but, the glass full of sepia tears
relays the slides of previous days, and previous hazes.

sapphire, sweet sapphire eyes, kiss my hand
ever softly, like tender morning dew on emerald blades…

shivers reverberate, like soft waves cresting the shore,
and incandescent pearls pierce rose.

the blood flowing gently in tune with sepia tears,
and we laugh.

And, the rain drones on, silently
as I’m left watching from beyond the glass haze.

Jesse said 9 years, 11 months ago:

Beautiful poem, it’s a good read. I could see all of the imagery you wrote. Keep up the good work :)

Matt Kooper tho said 9 years, 10 months ago:

I love this! Such good imagery

Hayden said 9 years, 10 months ago:

It’s absolutely beautiful.
Well done!

Hearmenow said 9 years, 10 months ago:

This is beautiful, I love how vividly you’ve managed to describe everything and all the colours. Keep it up!

Just Keep Going said 9 years, 9 months ago:

Loved it! It’s vivid and it’s real, we can feel all that you are describing. Thank you for sharing this amazing piece with us.

Poisonedredapple said 9 years, 9 months ago:

Dark and beautiful ^^

Cathy said 9 years, 9 months ago:

love this so much! such a lovely piece of writing