Carrie said 10 years ago:

I’m not incredible, or #1 on YouTube, but I do have a passion and would love to share it with you guys!
This is my latest film… it may not be impressive but the only way to improve is through criticism! I’d love to hear everyone’s input. Also, if anyone else makes films, send me the links! I’d love to watch them!

Carrie said 10 years ago:

Thanks for the feedback! Your animation is outstanding. The first couple seconds I couldn’t tell if it was live action or not. I did have to watch it a couple of times to get the full effect. The sniper’s role kind of threw me off, with his early detection and lack of shooting, but I do understand it after watching it a couple of times. Overall, I think it’s great. CG is no easy task but this was very well done!

hippiejoe said 10 years ago:

I liked the film a lot and you seem to have a good idea of what your doing. I’m a film major and some of the things I’ve learned might be able to help you. I’m not trying to be arrogant.

Things you could work on is the white balance. You had a couple of over exposed shots that could have been fixed with proper white balancing.
Color-Correction is key to getting that film look everyone loves so much. I’d recommend working on post production a bit longer.
This one really isn’t a critique but no one really uses zoom’s anymore in film unless they’re trying to emulate films from the 70s/80s. Most films these days use tracking shots or jump cuts to move location.

Sorry if I was too harsh. Film is my passion in life and I’ve been learning about it since I was little. Sadly I don’t have many friends so it’s kind of hard for me to film. I really did like your though. Keep up the good work.

Rish said 10 years ago:

Siddharth, that’s a brilliant film you’ve made! I guess you’ve heard it many times but your animation skills are radically impressive. And not all audience expect the movie to spoon feed the story, they actually appreciate that they get to use their minds to understand it by themselves. You’ve done appealing work.
Keep up the charm

A. said 10 years ago:

Well, I guess I’m not a “film maler” myself, but I’m an animator, both 2D and 3d, ditigal artist, even thought my passion is concept art for videogames and films.

But I can relate to this since I always get this thing, that I imagine stories and how would they be animated, when I listen to music. Music is like my fuel, really.

And so this week I started randomly trying out some things with drawings and such, and it’s turning into an actual animation because it looks kind of cool. It would be a very very short film, almost a teaser, but since I work all by myself and I will just work on this for the next week and maybe just a little longer (too keep moving and keep the brain fresh, you know), it will be something very short.

Actually it’s 2D but I’m trying to mix things a bit with 3D-plated things and play around a bit so it looks 3D-ish. Maybe I’ll put a link to it in a couple of weeks if someone wants to take a look at it, but since it’s in early stage I can only show a screencap of a half-done thing:

http://gyazo.com/5e0f3f637eea55d1202a242843eb890e

(I don’t know if it’s clear, just to make sure you know, that’s a bullet’s shell ^^” )

Deleted User said 9 years, 11 months ago:

(: I liked it