dresden-perfection said 10 years, 8 months ago:

burning bruising biting beasts
sing a lovely lie
and dance along a dying branch
as sunset stains the sky
brittle broken bitter blades
catch the evening’s reddened glow
if it’s not in your heart to ask
perhaps you shouldn’t know

same difference said 10 years, 7 months ago:

I like this. You offset the rhymes with alliteration so neither stood out too too much, and the language is actually quite visual. Well done, and I hope you feel better. Thanks for sharing.