Kamaile2001 said 8 years, 11 months ago:

Hiding your face from the people who judge
But take off the mask we don’t wanna see what’s above
We want to see you
You re beautiful on the outside
It’s about time you knew

lasette3 said 8 years, 10 months ago:

unoriginal it sounds more like your complaining also you don’t have to write poetry in that tone don’t give up your day job your poetry sucks write about something that affects you it dosent have to be sad or depressing it just has to be you and a real emotion that I can actually feel not something fake you made up on the spot for attention and don’t tell me you worked hard on this cause the lack of creativity and the lack of sincerity tells me otherwise

Viskronika said 8 years, 10 months ago:

@Swagtastilicious helper : Hoping you realize that this is one-poem-per-page kind of thing, one person posts a poem and everyone else comments on it with feedback, posting your own poem is actually quite selfish and rude, considering you could have just created your own thread from scratch it would have been a lot easier. This just appears to be you competing with the first person, I bet you didn’t even read their poem, you just posted yours in a reckless, fiendish, manner because you can’t breathe unless it’s attention in the air. Well you came to the right site because you’re in desperate need mental assistance.

Viskronika said 8 years, 10 months ago:

@rabe No problem, Thanks for sharing your poem!