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580 QA Reputation54 | Exie said 7 years, 3 months ago: This What is this? My heart feels like it has been hollowed out It feels completely empty My body feels like an empty shell Void of blood and organs With only a soul trapped inside Fear Once gripped me But that has long since passed This is the aftermath that comes Once you realize that you have lost the battle And there is no way out This is what it feels like to be without hope Wandering Day in, day out Wondering if I’m actually moving forward Or just standing still Wondering if time still keeps going Wondering if it even matters anyway Anger Once gave me strength to fight But that, too, has long since passed This is the fallout that comes After you have lost the war and are forced home To hang your head from the shame of defeat This is what it feels like when you are trapped I feel caged By my own body By my age By my experience By my education By everyone around me This is what it feels like to have the world pushing against you When you are too weak To push back | |
 Passing Stranger
580 QA Reputation54 | Exie said 7 years, 3 months ago: This is a poem I wrote a while back when I was feeling depressed and frustrated. If anyone has any comments or constructive criticism, I’d be happy to here it! Thanks for reading! | |
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0 QA Reputation0 | Deleted User said 7 years, 3 months ago: it’s very good i’m not great at poetry. | |
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580 QA Reputation54 | Exie said 7 years, 3 months ago: Thanks very much!!! | |
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3086 QA Reputation18 | No need for intros said 7 years, 3 months ago: Holy crap Exie, that’s amazing on like every level. Seriously, I wish I could write this well. | |
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580 QA Reputation54 | Exie said 7 years, 3 months ago: Awww, thanks!!! But I’m not really good at writing, just poetry. I can’t write short stories for crap, and I suck at writing papers and stuff. I’m pretty good at poetry, but that’s really it XD. | |
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