Exie said 6 years, 6 months ago:

This

What is this?
My heart feels like it has been hollowed out
It feels completely empty
My body feels like an empty shell
Void of blood and organs
With only a soul trapped inside

Fear
Once gripped me
But that has long since passed
This is the aftermath that comes
Once you realize that you have lost the battle
And there is no way out

This is what it feels like to be without hope

Wandering
Day in, day out
Wondering if I’m actually moving forward
Or just standing still
Wondering if time still keeps going
Wondering if it even matters anyway

Anger
Once gave me strength to fight
But that, too, has long since passed
This is the fallout that comes
After you have lost the war and are forced home
To hang your head from the shame of defeat

This is what it feels like when you are trapped

I feel caged

By my own body

By my age

By my experience

By my education

By everyone around me

This is what it feels like to have the world pushing against you

When you are too weak

To push back

Exie said 6 years, 6 months ago:

This is a poem I wrote a while back when I was feeling depressed and frustrated. If anyone has any comments or constructive criticism, I’d be happy to here it!
Thanks for reading!

Deleted User said 6 years, 6 months ago:

it’s very good :) i’m not great at poetry.

Exie said 6 years, 6 months ago:

Thanks very much!!!

No need for intros said 6 years, 6 months ago:

Holy crap Exie, that’s amazing on like every level. Seriously, I wish I could write this well.

Exie said 6 years, 6 months ago:

Awww, thanks!!! But I’m not really good at writing, just poetry. I can’t write short stories for crap, and I suck at writing papers and stuff. I’m pretty good at poetry, but that’s really it XD.

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