angie said 7 years, 10 months ago:

Can you guys have a look at it and comment on my writing style?
Here is the link :

Deleted User said 7 years, 10 months ago:

You write well. But I still see some room for improvement there. I found a grammar mistake in one of the paragraphs. Please allow me to proofread and retype the paragraph while correcting the error(s):

“Famous people like Helen Keller and Thomas Edison, in spite of being deaf, were able to lead the world to new heights. They were the living examples of people who had contributed to the society to the extent where you or I could never think of. And here we are, calling them ‘deaf and dumb’, breaking every ounce of their will power. Who gave us this right to label them? Did we ever consider how they felt, constantly being pitied, sympathized and feeling different at almost every moment of their life?”