mariko said 8 years, 4 months ago:

Pierce through my skin. Do you feel it?
Do you feel my blood boiling?
Do you feel the absolute darkness within me?
Do you feel my inner demons whispering their little secrets in your ear?

Pierce through my skin.
Feel what I feel.
Suffer like I suffer.
Cry a river, in fact, become one.
As each drop burns like acid in your skin.

Pierce through my skin and become me.
And then. Just maybe then… you’ll know the real me.

The darkness that remains in my soul, like an immortal truth.

You’ll know me. Heaven and Hell.

And maybe..just maybe… you’ll truly understand that you don’t really want me.

mariko said 8 years, 4 months ago:

So this was written right now, right here, just like that. It isn’t my best, but hey, please tell me what you guys think :)
And sorry if there is any spelling erros. I’m writing in english, which is my second language.

Deleted User said 8 years, 4 months ago:

I really like it, especially the ending. I love how dark and, well, raw it is. It’s awesome that you’ve shared it thanks :)

mariko said 8 years, 4 months ago:

@ellie-michaels thank you so much. tbh it was the first time I wrote poetry in English, but I was feeling like it, so I just did. I’m glad it wasn’t that bad of a poem , I guess I can be good writing in english as well :)
Thank you once again for your lovely comment, made me very happy