Please tell me what you think of my poem… Thank you
I know you’re trying your hardest but you think its not good enough
you think everyone is judging so you try to act tough
Smile through the pain but you couildnt smile forever
everything was worse you just wanted to get better
you tried the drugs the alcohol to take away the pain
it didnt work the only thing it did was make you forget your name
andnow youre lost and youre scared we can tell you’re afraid
we tried to help you but you said it was too late
our words are words youve heard before
you cried and said ”if there’s a God out there why don’t he care no more”
you begged and please
said ”someone please help me”
im lost maybe not physically but mentally
ive held on so long I just wanna let go
people say they’ll miss me when I’m gone but I know they wont
I tried to expect the unexpected but that didnt even work
im tired of the pain I’m tired of all the hurt
my world is a bundled mess
people seem to think of me like im less
its like im drowning in fire
and burning in water and there’s no escape